Tuesday, 17 March 2009

Silent times

I realised something's wrong with
my room.
It's too dark, especially in the morning.
Cause the blinds don't work,
the light's too dim.
It may be good
for playing L4D at 2 at night,
it isn't good for studying
by midnight oil.

The blinds are thick,
it's quite quiet.
Sometimes too quiet.

Now I need the lights on
to sleep. Not for comfort
but for precaution.
Against sleeping in.



***Trying my hand at Creative Writing. Comments?***

1 comment:

The Public Transit Girl said...

Since it's creative writing
I won't say how right it is
The characters can go on rambling
till the day ends. You'll never know.
How much you'd have spent.

I like writing aimlessly (or was it typing?)
for hours. Even if I forget homework.
I like being crazy (or was insane)
at times. Even if I break the rigid rules.

But I can't help blinding my eyes at figurative and literal words
That "2" isn't at night
That you don't study by midnight "oil"

But I can't help amusing myself
That "quite quiet" brings little litters of noise
That "silent" hides "times" without m.

I won't say anything, because I am
not saying anything.
Quiet.
Quiet.
Quiet.


I need a dream.